EnactJudo's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dancer]

wait, what?

alright, good job.

[Divisive Issue]

I'm with the left side

FUCK BROCCOLI.

HybridMind responds:

:D

[Everybody Get Naked! Righ Now!]

Well, you're better than a lot of people.

It's ok, but there's a lot of things you should work on. The first thing that drew my negative attention was the blond one's face(I dislike nearly everything about it- chin, eyes, etc). Second would be both women's panty-lines(It continues to bleed into the legs in the center- that is the major problem).

I think with some consistent practice with proportions you'd notice a change for the better in your abilities. And chances are you're getting that with the fair number of flashes under your belt. Try to stay out of comfort zones however.

[The Horse and the Fox]

ha!

Which is the horse, which is the fox?

[Dora the explorer]

ok fine

you know you did good when I leave a positive review

HOLIMOUNT responds:

i honestly dont know why you waist your time?

you suck at trolling man

[Cherry lee clean]

I have a little head

meow

HOLIMOUNT responds:

if you say so mate
and yes i know you have a little head
but i think your brain is even smaller

[Call Me Sammie Saibot]

Ha!

What a Noob.

[Courier Vs. Courier]

epic!

I made friends with Ulysses though

Cricketto responds:

I almost did, but I accidentally f***ed up the speech check though. And then, epicness ensued.

[BANG BANG.]

Aw man!

This is a really good pic upper body-down. Good detail on the body and great on the clothing. But the arms and face are bad. Arms are too long (mainly forearms) and face is a bit funky on her right eye.

GG all together but if I were you I'd have struggled to perfect the arms way more.

[Porn and Violence]

hmm

I think you could have done a better job with the story, it feels like you just winged it. I'd have left out all the manurisms like *smirk* and *giggle* and narrated it regularly instead of script-like.

I think you could have done better with the pic as well. Keep practicing both and you'll get better.

Lugen responds:

Thanks for the review. I appreciate it. :D
As for the story, truth is I thought of adding the description as a story on the spot. I have no time editing it. So yup. It feels like that.

But anyway, thanks for the review. I'll try my best improving my background as well as the details.