wait, what?
alright, good job.
wait, what?
alright, good job.
I'm with the left side
FUCK BROCCOLI.
:D
Well, you're better than a lot of people.
It's ok, but there's a lot of things you should work on. The first thing that drew my negative attention was the blond one's face(I dislike nearly everything about it- chin, eyes, etc). Second would be both women's panty-lines(It continues to bleed into the legs in the center- that is the major problem).
I think with some consistent practice with proportions you'd notice a change for the better in your abilities. And chances are you're getting that with the fair number of flashes under your belt. Try to stay out of comfort zones however.
ha!
Which is the horse, which is the fox?
ok fine
you know you did good when I leave a positive review
I have a little head
meow
if you say so mate
and yes i know you have a little head
but i think your brain is even smaller
Ha!
What a Noob.
epic!
I made friends with Ulysses though
I almost did, but I accidentally f***ed up the speech check though. And then, epicness ensued.
Aw man!
This is a really good pic upper body-down. Good detail on the body and great on the clothing. But the arms and face are bad. Arms are too long (mainly forearms) and face is a bit funky on her right eye.
GG all together but if I were you I'd have struggled to perfect the arms way more.
hmm
I think you could have done a better job with the story, it feels like you just winged it. I'd have left out all the manurisms like *smirk* and *giggle* and narrated it regularly instead of script-like.
I think you could have done better with the pic as well. Keep practicing both and you'll get better.
Thanks for the review. I appreciate it. :D
As for the story, truth is I thought of adding the description as a story on the spot. I have no time editing it. So yup. It feels like that.
But anyway, thanks for the review. I'll try my best improving my background as well as the details.
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