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Far too generic

I mean this as lightly as possible, but I really don't like it. The pose is generic, and it really seems off in the lower body to the thighs. The design of the character's skin is ok, but the bright anime/final fantasy clothing is a strong dislike. On a personal note I don't like the face, probably because of the hair- did you draw her skull before adding the hair?

amyrenee responds:

Well I was trying to draw this as a concept drawing. I wasn't trying to make the clothing anime/final fantasy but I suppose it kind of looks like that. And I drew her head prior to drawing the hair and personally I really like her face. Oh well. I like it. Thanks for the review

Your detailing is nice

but you really need to work on proportion.

Rodziewicz responds:

Yes, I know about that. I`m gonna try to improve it.

I really dislike your character Claus.

No, not because he's hateable , that's clearly what you want. My problem is his Mary-sue quality of never dying or even occasionally getting harmed like your other characters.

I will comment since you asked.

I have a few nitpicks, mostly to have to do with the faces. I really dislike the direction their eyes are pointing, it seems to almost give them a lifeless, vacant stare. Shepard's mouth bugs me too, it's nearly invisible. Overall, I can tell you were much more careful drawing Liara.

Rennis5 responds:

shapard was harder to draw, there is alot more detail in his line art then liara's,
but liara was painted better.
i might add to it one day,
there are a few small things i don't like about it either but it was taking too long to finish

I'm not really sure whats going on with the back

Where the left arm connects to body. Midsection seems a bit off, and likewise the overall shape of the face. Overall it's alright.

actually

despite your errors, I thought the punchline was p. good.

Rennis5 responds:

thanks dude, i'm glad you liked the punchline and that someone finally commented on this :)

Oi!

I really like the one on the left.

it's ok

I really, really dislike how bright it is though.

pretty well done

I have a few nitpicks. I don't like the face; it seems proportionately good but it's almost unpleasant. She seems to have a vacant lifeless stare so to speak. The breasts also seem a bit off. The clothing doesn't match the sway, and the sway itself seems a bit off as well. She seems to be missing a belly button too, but I might be trying too hard to look for mistakes.

Maszrum responds:

Thank you! That gives me an idea to what to pay more attention in the future. =)

I find your work p. enjoyable

You really need to take the time to work on your faces though. You should leave your comfort zone of large eyes, and invert your pictures to get a better look.

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/97a23fdc4459896084e8d63b37907bfd
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/0da6f4d5c4bc7cd09582e8184e58764e

KillstixCHix responds:

It's my style of drawing.

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