this is undoubtably
one of the funniest things I have ever seen.
this is undoubtably
one of the funniest things I have ever seen.
lol wut?
I don't know what just happened there but it was p. good.
I really think you could have done better.
Judging from your art, you're no noob.
There is blatant use of tweens, noticeable to anyone who's ever dabbled in flash. The most painful being the hand holding the pencil animation. It stood out like a sore thumb because the angle was clearly off as well.
While this is most likely just something you did to get the kinks out, you could have dabbled in a little frame by frame. Or at least used more than one or two tweens in certain areas to make it more dynamic.
haha
I'\m glad I watched this.
This is not bad
However, first and foremost, you beat around the bush too much.
The intro took way too long, to the point where I almost lost interest. Plus after you had finally caught my attention with that chase scene, you had that useless pause that cut it short. It seemed like you used it as a bad transition for a hallucination. I think a better transition would have been the main character being tackled, then having it cut to the character with a shocked look on his face, captioning it with "I've got to stop imagining things."
Some of the animation was a bit dull as well. When he turns it's clear that there isn't any animation. It should be noted that when he makes eye contact with the red eyed girl, her clothing is rippling about as if there is wind, while his is not. If you were aiming for some sort of majestic sinister look in that, a better approach would have been having it gently floating instead of flapping.
haha
Admittedly, this is awesome.
Very enjoyable!
You are quite talented; I've always followed your work here. Cheers man.
You clearly have talent
The voice acting left something to be desired; especially the female actors.
Personally I think you would be much more successful taking what you know about flash animating and drawing and use it to create your own story.
thanks
Looks cool man
Video game sprites are garbage, but custom sprites look pretty good. I'm curious exactly what your process is for making these.
Drinking lots of cofee and then going apeshit. I didn't work with a concept :D Thanks for your review.
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