EnactJudo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Legend of David 5]

these kind of things always depress me...

... when someone with a significant amount of skill decides to waste their time with a fanfiction. I really wish you would have taken the time to use your abilities to develop a completely original idea rather than paste one onto nintendo's, but I digress.

On to the overall movie though, my major concern is the laughably terrible voice acting. I'm not even trying to be an asshole when I say "laughable", but if it's enough to actually make me grin it's best I don't sit here and sugar-coat it. At least get a few voice actors instead of voicing everything yourself.

You should invest a bit more into your writing and dialogue too.

I think you should try to pursue other projects. While something like this is constructive to your animation and drawing skills, it does little for your creativity. Your animation isn't bad. You're no professional, but no one here is. And to give credit where it's due, this is above and beyond a massive chunk of what's submitted here.

[Fisthead vs. Pinata]

this is undoubtably

one of the funniest things I have ever seen.

[Smashin Brothas]

lol

ok that was p. good, in a non sequitur way

[C'mon Scoob]

lol wut?

I don't know what just happened there but it was p. good.

[GOLEM]

I really think you could have done better.

Judging from your art, you're no noob.

There is blatant use of tweens, noticeable to anyone who's ever dabbled in flash. The most painful being the hand holding the pencil animation. It stood out like a sore thumb because the angle was clearly off as well.

While this is most likely just something you did to get the kinks out, you could have dabbled in a little frame by frame. Or at least used more than one or two tweens in certain areas to make it more dynamic.

[Boondocks: Huey and Ming]

haha

I'\m glad I watched this.

[Subway Edition - horror]

This is not bad

However, first and foremost, you beat around the bush too much.

The intro took way too long, to the point where I almost lost interest. Plus after you had finally caught my attention with that chase scene, you had that useless pause that cut it short. It seemed like you used it as a bad transition for a hallucination. I think a better transition would have been the main character being tackled, then having it cut to the character with a shocked look on his face, captioning it with "I've got to stop imagining things."

Some of the animation was a bit dull as well. When he turns it's clear that there isn't any animation. It should be noted that when he makes eye contact with the red eyed girl, her clothing is rippling about as if there is wind, while his is not. If you were aiming for some sort of majestic sinister look in that, a better approach would have been having it gently floating instead of flapping.

[Chefmaster]

haha

Admittedly, this is awesome.

[I Have Bird]

Very enjoyable!

You are quite talented; I've always followed your work here. Cheers man.

[Resident Evil 4 Animation]

You clearly have talent

The voice acting left something to be desired; especially the female actors.

Personally I think you would be much more successful taking what you know about flash animating and drawing and use it to create your own story.

Anax responds:

thanks