EnactJudo's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fallout scrap armor]

Your detailing is nice

but you really need to work on proportion.

Rodziewicz responds:

Yes, I know about that. I`m gonna try to improve it.

[Liara and Shapard]

I will comment since you asked.

I have a few nitpicks, mostly to have to do with the faces. I really dislike the direction their eyes are pointing, it seems to almost give them a lifeless, vacant stare. Shepard's mouth bugs me too, it's nearly invisible. Overall, I can tell you were much more careful drawing Liara.

Rennis5 responds:

shapard was harder to draw, there is alot more detail in his line art then liara's,
but liara was painted better.
i might add to it one day,
there are a few small things i don't like about it either but it was taking too long to finish

[Ninja love]

actually

despite your errors, I thought the punchline was p. good.

Rennis5 responds:

thanks dude, i'm glad you liked the punchline and that someone finally commented on this :)

[Guitar Girl]

pretty well done

I have a few nitpicks. I don't like the face; it seems proportionately good but it's almost unpleasant. She seems to have a vacant lifeless stare so to speak. The breasts also seem a bit off. The clothing doesn't match the sway, and the sway itself seems a bit off as well. She seems to be missing a belly button too, but I might be trying too hard to look for mistakes.

Maszrum responds:

Thank you! That gives me an idea to what to pay more attention in the future. =)

[Distance of the Stars]

I find your work p. enjoyable

You really need to take the time to work on your faces though. You should leave your comfort zone of large eyes, and invert your pictures to get a better look.

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/97a23fdc4459896084e8d63b37907bfd
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/0da6f4d5c4bc7cd09582e8184e58764e

KillstixCHix responds:

It's my style of drawing.

[Veigar]

critique

It looks way too much like a final fantasy black mage, though I'm not sure if it's your actual creation or something else from some other game. Right arm is a tidbit off as well, at least in my opinion. Still looking p. good though.

Dawn-Breaker responds:

I understand, but I'm not the original creator of this character. But I do agree that it's pretty much a resembelance of the blackmage character of Final Fantasy.

Yeah I figured the arm looked a bit off / strange ,but that's because his casting hand (with the fire ball) is a big metal armored glove so it looks bigger ,and thus might be confusing. however! thanks for digging it, still.

[Gaddafi Duck]

ha

scouted you for this fyi

SugarCain responds:

Thanks

[depressed man doing cosplay]

Ha, not bad.

Is he cosplaying as Donald duck?

Daagah responds:

haha yes

[Shiawase]

oh dear

its not Shadman unless there's at least one scantily dressed corpse.

Seriously, bravo though, three points for at least refraining from raping the little girl for once.

TheShadling responds:

If the Tsunami doesnt get her, the Earthquakes will rape her eventually.

[Soft As Chalk]

not bad

My favorite is the one in the bottom right corner.

Aigis responds:

Thank you.