EnactJudo's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[That One Girl!]

so'k

Rip cage is way off though. Legs and right arm are also a bit strange. You should have also fixed the lines in the left shoulder; they are rigid.

GratuitousFlogginsMD responds:

thanks for the input, I think the trouble with the rigidity is due to the program I use. Its Corel Painter Essentials 4, came with my tablet...I haven't been able to get much smoothness out of it. Rib cage I see. Thanks again for the suggestions. I'll apply this to future works.

[Naka Verson 2]

s'ok

It's as clear as day that the face and body proportions are way off. Its not bad at all, but I'd have worked a bit harder on that.

NikuSama responds:

to be honest with you i had done this one with in a hour. the first one i did was alot better. and yes i did somewhat of a cop out since i was pretty much done with the drawing and i could care less on how it turned out since i was to go on to bigger and better things. so i understand where your comming from. thanks for the info

[Modern Hyrule]

lol wut

This is an accurate depiction of what would happen if Microsoft bought that franchise.

Nambread responds:

Nah man, EA. Zelda with guns, lots of bloom, lots of motion blur, lots of brown. Zelda's a cheerleader or some shit. Pretty bad game idea, great for artwork though.

[Now we are Best Friends]

This

is a beautiful artwork.

zappawadda responds:

You...

Are a beautiful person.

[Kermit]

hahaha

This is so going on my favorites

Toast-Tony responds:

Cheers dude :) Glad you like it!

[Marina in the bathtub]

Excellent

Well done, gorgeous and tasteful. Cheers!

Sevens responds:

Thank you!

[FI Breasts Chart]

seriously

You have to tone down the silly breast fetish. You push it to the point where it is physically and anatomically incorrect, and it serves little purpose other then some sort of bizarre fan service.

I don't dislike you, because apart from that your work is fairly mild. The characters up top seem alright, but anything below is grossly enlarged, and honestly, unpleasant looking. I also dislike the design of the character labeled SDA-6; it looks way too much like KOS-MOS and the statue of liberty.

Jcdr responds:

Then again the physics of the world doesn't apply completely to anime, there are also worse fetishes than this one :/

It's a matter of tastes, I find nice every size of the chart.

Note that every character will look like something or someone else for everyone, you can't have a completely original character without similarities with others.

[Tox the Otter]

This is bad compared to some of your other work.

Your pictures of dolls and fairies are nice, but this looks bad. The proportion is terrible; it almost looks like a lifeless drawing mannequin. While it's good to leave your comfort zone, drawing things like these are cancerous.

peppypippy32 responds:

cancerous, no. good to leave comfort zone? yes. the mannequin look, i just tried to give her a leaned back relaxed curious pose. otters are known for their short attention span and their curiousity. thankyou for liking my fairies and dolls.

[What About the Future?]

Not bad

I think the coloring is pretty good.

A funny thing I realized is how phallic this is. The rainbow lasers look like sperm and the centered building resembles a shlong.

Mosamabindrawin responds:

Thanks!
And yes phallic is definitely a word i would use to describe this. Those sperm-looking lasers are actually souls/spirits that i purposely made to look like sperm :)

[The Great Unmoving Library]

If I were you

I would tone down the breast fetish a little.

Jcdr responds:

Can´t do anything about it in this pic, the person requested huge breasts.