EnactJudo's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[shepard and liara]

Nice improvement

I see you fixed Shepard's mouth, it's definitely better but I feel as though his upper lip should be a bit smaller. I noticed you added some touches to his armor as well, which make it look better than before.

The background is much better as well, but I still have some nitpicks. The railing perspective was pretty well done, minus the left corner where it seemingly shrinks a bit. The buildings look nice, though they seem a tad too flat. The lines for the far right building are noticeably off as well.

Overall, a clear improvement from the last.

[Pics or it didn't happen]

I agree with dubya

pics or it didn't happen

[Velociraptor]

don't see why you think "Meh"

Cause I think this is really cool. It's like a riding-raptor geisha.

[Fallout scrap armor]

Your detailing is nice

but you really need to work on proportion.

Rodziewicz responds:

Yes, I know about that. I`m gonna try to improve it.

[Claus 003]

I really dislike your character Claus.

No, not because he's hateable , that's clearly what you want. My problem is his Mary-sue quality of never dying or even occasionally getting harmed like your other characters.

[Liara and Shapard]

I will comment since you asked.

I have a few nitpicks, mostly to have to do with the faces. I really dislike the direction their eyes are pointing, it seems to almost give them a lifeless, vacant stare. Shepard's mouth bugs me too, it's nearly invisible. Overall, I can tell you were much more careful drawing Liara.

Rennis5 responds:

shapard was harder to draw, there is alot more detail in his line art then liara's,
but liara was painted better.
i might add to it one day,
there are a few small things i don't like about it either but it was taking too long to finish

[b/w self portrait]

I'm not really sure whats going on with the back

Where the left arm connects to body. Midsection seems a bit off, and likewise the overall shape of the face. Overall it's alright.