I really don't think it's that bad
You need a bit of work, I can tell you that much. but overall it's alright.
As for critique I really can't pinpoint it that well. I have a feeling its on the arms and legs though. Don't quote me on it, but I feel as though the arms are slightly shorter than they should be, and the legs aren't the right perspective.
Perhaps overall whats off is the limb's perspective.
Atleast you put more thought into it than ''she's got a nice vagina''. Thanks for the constructive critisism!
hmph
six stars since you managed to refrain from having them naked and mutilated.
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hmm
Overall it's alright, but I see way to many problems. I have no idea what the cross-like shape in the midsection is about, and am even more confused of the strange bulge below. The jet black areas also lacked detail; in the future you should use a very dark grey or navy instead.
Hmm... good idea. Thank you!
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apparently Osama got his 72 virgins
Nice improvement
I see you fixed Shepard's mouth, it's definitely better but I feel as though his upper lip should be a bit smaller. I noticed you added some touches to his armor as well, which make it look better than before.
The background is much better as well, but I still have some nitpicks. The railing perspective was pretty well done, minus the left corner where it seemingly shrinks a bit. The buildings look nice, though they seem a tad too flat. The lines for the far right building are noticeably off as well.
Overall, a clear improvement from the last.
I agree with dubya
pics or it didn't happen
hey yo
why is the right leg way larger than the right?
hurray
Sabtastic has another male stalker
don't see why you think "Meh"
Cause I think this is really cool. It's like a riding-raptor geisha.
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